Thank You & The White Shadow

Thank you to those bloggers and others who read my short story below (now on the left). Quite a few of you, according to my blog stats. I do realise crime won’t appeal to everyone as science fiction and horror doesn’t appeal to me. Although I hadn’t thought about it (as much as it helps), posting my short story did not rope in a ton of blog followers except for a few likes on Facebook, and one Twitter follower, which could’ve been coincidence. A special thank you to Bookman Beattie for following – a delight and privilege.

So now it’s back to writing my novel which, I realised the other day, is turning into a mystery novel. I’m also coming up with new ideas for my other short crime stories. Who knew I was going to head in this direction too. In the past I said short story writing wasn’t for me, but strange spasms of creativeness can change old ways of thinking (even blocked one’s :) ), especially if the words roll off the tongue and the process is enjoyable.

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At the moment, I’m reading The White Shadow by Andrea Eames, and as with her debut novel The Cry Of The Go Away Bird, it’s set in Rhodesia (Zimbabwe) and narrated from a child’s point of view. But instead of the 1990s during the farm raids, we’re taken back to the 1960s during another turbulent time of that countries political unrest. For me, what makes this novel more appealing is that it’s told from a Shona boy’s (Tinashe) perspective as opposed to a white Zimbabwean girl’s (Elise). Andrea explores themes of colonisation and white supremacy, and the effect it has on a Shona boy’s life. The story is insightful, and Andrea’s strength lies not only in her talent for storytelling, but her wonderful way with words that capture and reel you in immediately.

Read My Short Crime Story (IN HER BLOOD)

I mentioned on my writer’s Facebook Page (please like me on the left there) that I’d post up this short story I dabbled with a while back and had completely forgotten about. When I re-read the piece, I was strangely pleased with it. A tweak or two later and voila!  I also had a play around with Word’s publishing layout (Mac version) which was super friendly but, as far as my limited techno skills go, you can’t copy and paste without losing the text! This is a rough version of my cover design; good enough for now. In the future I hope to epublish In Her Blood along with a few other short stories I have waiting in my archives. At present the novel-in-progress takes precedence, which may mean a bit of a wait. But here is the first ‘short’ for your consumption. The following is single-spaced and three pages long. Thanks for stopping by. (Unfortunately the formatting for posts wants to double space and left align whenever I tab or enter. Hope it’s not too distracting.)

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Detective Senior Sergeant Roy Healey flew out the door as if someone had thrown him out. He bent forward and emptied his stomach on the wooden deck, then wiped his mouth and staggered around before taking a few deep breaths to settle his pounding heart.

Roy dropped onto the stairs and peered down the road, searching for his partner, James. The street was empty and eerily quiet. Less than an hour ago they had cordoned off the streets and captured Marsh. No one had bothered to check the basement till now. Roy got out his cell phone and called James’ number but hung up after two rings. He needed a few more minutes to rid his thoughts of the evil he’d just come across – an entire family wiped out in the most gruesome manner. It was the second killing in three months. He had no words to describe it. Roy was a seasoned police officer, but the scene would leave a permanent scar in his brain, no matter how much counseling they would put him through. He immediately thought of his kid. Fifteen years old, the same age as the two slaughtered girls back inside. Shaking his head, he ran his fingers through his hair then glanced at his watch. Lizzie would be home from school by now. He punched her number on his cell phone.

“Hi, Dad.”

“Hi. I’ll be home a bit late tonight. Is it OK if we go out for dinner or I could pick up takeaways?”

“Are you OK, Dad? You sound a bit funny.”

He felt the tremor in his hands and cleared his throat. “I’m fine.”

“I can tell when you’re not.”

He kept forgetting she was smarter and more perceptive than most fifteen year olds.

“I’m working on a heavy case.”

“Well, that explains it. I suppose you don’t want to talk to me about it?”

In spite of himself, he managed to smile because they had one house rule above all rules. His work was left at work. End of discussion. He was aware of her dream job – a forensic or police psychologist, and she was always testing him.

“Dad?”

“When you’re older, OK?”

She sighed on purpose. “Can we go get a steak somewhere? I feel like a juicy sirloin.”

“Are you kidding me?”

Roy was a vegetarian. Years ago before joining the police force he was a firefighter. He had seen bodies burnt to a crisp, and the smell had put an end to his meat-eating days. Lizzie liked to tease him. She was laughing now, a laugh that sounded like wind charms – melodic, resonating and sweet. It always soothed his shattered nerves, and also reminded him too much of Lizzie’s mother, Sam. Three years ago they had lost her – wife, mother, and a detective sergeant killed in the line of duty. Sam had been shot three times during a major drug raid.

“All right,” said Lizzie. “ We’ll get a salad somewhere. Your pick, Dad.”

“I’ll be home around seven-ish. Are you doing your homework?”

He could hear the television blaring in the background.

“No homework on a Friday, remember?”

“What are you watching?”

“Don’t worry Dad. It’s not as if I’m watching SoHo.”

There had been a month’s free trial to encourage viewers to purchase the new Sky Television channel. But after realizing the majority of those shows were violent and restricted, he let the special offer go.

“Dad, are you there? Can Shelley come over for company?”

Roy got up quickly when he saw his partner striding towards him.

“Sure she can. Don’t forget to dead bolt the doors.”

“Yes, Dad.”

“I better go. I’ll see you later.”

James recoiled when he saw the regurgitated toastie splattered on the deck. “I could’ve got you a club sandwich, Roy.”

“Don’t go in there yet!”

“Why? What’ve you found?”

Roy gave his partner a quick run-down, warning him about the scene he was about to encounter. The worst family massacre he’d ever seen.

While James wrinkled his nose and stepped inside, Roy called up the Inspector, the rest of the squad, a pathologist and forensics team, photographers, all the experts he could think of. This was going to be bigger than that last case, and he wasn’t leaving any stone unturned. He would ensure their investigation was thorough and correct, with no holes for a defense lawyer and his team to blow apart. Dean Brian Marsh would go to hell.

As soon as he finished calling them in, Roy’s cell phone buzzed back at him. “Inspector?”

“We’ve got a problem.”

“What?”

“Marsh just got away. Escaped!”

“What?!”

“The police van was in an accident and somehow he got away.”

Roy started cursing. “How … when did this happen?”

The Inspector filled him in with details and everything that he said went right through Roy like a blast of cold wind.

“Roy? Are you there?”

“My daughter, Ellory! Marsh knows where I live!”

“I’ll get a patrol car round … “

Roy cut off the Inspector and hit his home number. He held his breath. It rang three times, four times, five … “Come on Lizzie. Pick up, pick up.” It rang ten times before he called her cell phone. By this time his heart was back beating like a jack hammer. He walked in circles, clawing his fingers through his hair. “Come on Lizzie. Come on.” When her answering service came on he left a scrambled message as he bolted towards his car.

Behind him, Roy heard James stumbling out the door, swearing. He turned to see him leaning against the wall, a hand pressed to his mouth. But Roy dived into his vehicle, fish-tailed the car out of there and shot down the road with his siren screaming.

He drove at high-speed, overtaking dangerously. He had to wipe the blood and gore images from his mind before it would drive him blind and he crashed the car into an oncoming vehicle. His jaw was clenched and the tighter he gripped the steering the whiter his knuckles became.

It took him fifteen minutes to reach his street, the longest fifteen minutes he had ever experienced. His continued attempts to contact Lizzie had failed. Did she remember to dead bolt the front door? Did she remember where he kept his Glock? Did she remember how to use it? Of course she did. For the past year, since the growing rise in serious crimes and the recent pursuit of Marsh, he’d taken her to his parents’ farm, where he’d taught her the mechanics of a pistol, how to use it responsibly and store it safely, and above all, how to shoot with a steady arm and a sharp eye. She was good, very good. No, excellent.

Before he took the next corner, he turned off his siren and lights. He could see his house in the distance.

Roy rolled the car up onto the wide berm silently; there were already two patrol cars in the driveway. He noted they were empty and two doors were left wide open, not always a good sign. He scanned the place for crouching officers, armed to the hilt, surrounding his property, but he saw nothing.

Roy withdrew his Glock and slid out of the driver’s seat.

When he reached the front door, he found it unlocked. He felt his throat constrict and held his breath.

Arms raised and gun poised, he entered the house.

Approaching the kitchen, he heard muffled voices. It was followed by his daughter’s unmistakable ring of laughter. Before Roy could lower his gun or do anything, a voice boomed out behind him, “PUT DOWN YOUR WEAPON, NOW!”

The laughter and voices stopped, and there was an instant scrambling noise.

Roy placed his gun on the floor slowly.

“Keep your hands up and turn around. Then kick your gun towards me.”

Roy came face to face with a uniformed police officer. He was pointing a Taser at him. Totally relieved, Roy said, “I’m  … “

“Dad! What are you doing here?”

Roy swiveled round and there she was, in one piece, and unharmed. He felt the weight of the world leave him while Lizzie folded her arms and gave him the daggers.

“Uh, well, I was …”

“I know where we keep the pistol,” she whispered up close. Then standing back she added in a loud voice, “These guys were here like in seconds. Apparently they made up some big lie about coming round for dinner.”

Roy delivered his daughter a sheepish grin.

The officer behind him lowered his Taser and three other officers fell into view and were lowering their own weapons. They looked at each other, failing to suppress their grins.

“Sir,” said one of the officers. “Can I have a word in private?”

“If it’s about that Marsh guy,” said Lizzie, “I’ll find out sooner or later.”

“Um, sir?”

Roy sighed and said to the officer-in-charge, “It’s all right. Like Lizzie said, she’ll find out sooner or later.”

“Just like Sam, sir?”

“Just like her Mum,” said Roy with a mix of fear and pride.

“You’ll be pleased to know sir, Ellory called just before you got here. They’ve recaptured Marsh.”

Copyright (c) Joanne P. Ganley, 2012

Novel Update (A walk in the park)

I tied a bow around my NaNoWriMo novel and slipped it in the letterbox, that is, the cardboard box in the back of my cupboard! (First draft) For another day. It’s a pretty good story, but there’s another one I couldn’t stop thinking about. So this past month I punched out my third novel!  I finished the first draft at 50,000 words. Sounds like a novella I know, so yes, I need another 30-40,000+ words!! The bones of the story are there, meaty in parts and hollow in others. It’s the quickest story I’ve written, mainly because I avoided flashbacks and different points of view, writing techniques I employed in the ambitious first novel. So this time round there’s only one point of view – less complex and easier for the writer to write, and the reader to follow! It’s a character-driven story that moves at a steady pace and thank goodness, in a linear fashion.

Bastion Point, Auckland, NEW ZEALAND

MeMe (random, stuff, that sort of thing)

  • There’s a new BBC production of Great Expectations showing on television, and I realized that this year marks the 200th anniversary of the British novelist’s birth. I’ve always found Dickens’ novels so bleak, and the many screen adaptations, bleaker. The dark atmosphere, poverty and pollution, the vast gap between rich and poor, child labour and so on. This time round, I was drawn to the new production, the acting and actors, and the pace of the show, curing my bleak-itus, and appreciating the story told. I was surprised to find US actress, Gillian Anderson from the X-files playing Mrs Haversham. I didn’t quite know what to think. I’ll wait until the three part series is over before I come up with a verdict.
  • I subscribe to a site called A.Word.A.Day; they too are honouring the author. Each week they have a different theme on topical subject matter, and each day of that week, a word arrives by email including its pronunciation, meaning, etymology and usage. This past week we’ve had wellerism, fagin, gamp, scrooge and gradgrind. It’s no wonder, honouring and remembering Dickens evokes one’s childhood – reading Great Expectations for English homework, and sitting in the majestic Civic theatre with wide eyes, watching Oliver Twist on a gigantic screen. Only to suffer from nightmares for a week, frightened by Bill Sykes’ violent behavior and sobbing for poor Nancy.
  • Back to television – I enjoyed series one of the US, stylish crime series The Killing (based on the successful Danish series). Why they gave it that title though, beats me. Why not call it Linden & Holder so it sticks in our minds, like Dalziel & Pascoe, Luther or Lewis. The name The Killing immediately engenders violence and death, turning viewers off who might have otherwise found it good quality viewing. There is more here than a crime being committed and police officers chasing the baddies. A well-balanced character and plot-driven drama, without guns blazing, wild car chases, explosions or wrinkle-free, pretty actors to garner our attention. It’s real acting, down to earth characters with non-stereotypical quirks and flaws, and likable too. Of course, this is my take on it; others may have an entirely different point of view. I look forward to the second series – set in Seattle, Washington and in production now.
  • At present I’m reading Road Markings – An Anthropologist in the Antipodes by Michael Jackson.  I’ve never heard of this NZ born author, I’m embarrassed to say, yes,  even with a name like that. I’ve seen the name crop up on Bookman Beattie’s blog (NZ’s go-to for hot off the press bookish info here and overseas) and scrolled past in a hurried fashion. I stumbled upon Jackson’s book at Rosa Mira Books – a classy, rather gorgeous looking NZ e-publishing site, by the way – and read the synopsis, blog posts and review. Within seconds I was hitting BUY NOW, and downloaded a copy onto my KOBO e-reader. So much for my book buying budget – a futile attempt at self-control. I would really like a hardcopy of this book too, when it comes out. I’m a third of the way through, and though it’s not the sort of book I normally read, I can’t express enough how much I’m enjoying this – a lovely, warm, engaging, life-affirming book to lie with in a hammock or bed, or next to a crackling fire, or on a road trip around New Zealand … review here.
  • Keeping with reading – I consumed within days a cosy mystery, Murder In The Second Row by NZ author Bev Robitai. I chuckled and belly-laughed throughout. Cosies are light and delightful, breaking the rollercoaster, heavy novels I tend to read. Robitai’s storytelling reminds me of Danish author, Dorte H. Jakobsen’s work. I haven’t read that many cosies, so Dorte is the only person I can make a comparison to, and a good comparison it is. Gosh, I’m dropping all these names and suddenly I feel uncomfortable and awkward. I have to keep reminding myself that everybody is doing it – building their platform, promoting, publicizing themselves and their writing, posting their favourite books and authors, et cetera. You don’t have to be published first, to do this.
  • As some of you know I joined the IWSG or the Insecure Writer’s Support Group. I imagine some readers will think ‘what’s up with that?’. Well, you know, it’s a wonderful way to meet fellow writers, also bloggers, from around the world, who are happy to share their insecurities, not their private lives’ I should clarify but their writing experiences, and wisdom. I find it inspiring, informative and encouraging. The group meets once a month. This month I caught up with a good dose of members on the subject of ‘comparing yourself to accomplished writers’ (definitely not recommended) in my previous post. Check it out when you can.
  • Through the IWSG and linking to so many blogs, one cannot ignore some of the interesting links, book tours, blog-hops and challenges you come across; always appealing, teasing, positive, reeling you in … One challenge I’m considering signing up for is the A-Z Challenge, which runs through the month of April rather than the whole year. Care to join me? It sounds like a lot of fun, and another way to build readership and new followers. To date there are almost 500+ signees! Without going into too much detail on how this works, participants must post every day of April except Sundays (26 days) and on any subject matter they choose, beginning with the letter A. Initially my subject for the challenge was to cover authors (bio) from New Zealand, but after some careful thought it looked too daunting a task. So, my next idea, was New Zealand itself – we live in a small, peaceful, beautiful country, why not post about that?  What do you think? Should I stick to writing and reading topics? Or anything? A mix?Should I post some of my writing? I’m too chicken to post my poetry – I’m not very good! That last statement just had me in stitches. My immediate thought was “I can’t write poetry like … because I’m not that good, not deep enough, smart enough …”. So yep, my previous post (IWSG) just nipped me in the bud!
  • Argh, look how long my post is! I’m always conscious of this (clearly not here) because veteran bloggers, bless their hearts, are so good at telling us how to run our blogs i.e. ‘short posts are better than long posts because we are too busy giving birth to our babies (stories, poems etc) to spend that amount of time on one blog when there are say, another 20 or more to get through in a day’. A fair guideline or instruction, and I totally agree. However, if you found a spare minute, trawled through the length of my post (or even skipped bits) to here, I thank you for taking the time.

The Liebster Blog Award

Thank you JT Webster for awarding me the Liebster Blog Award. JTW writes short stories. She’s also an aspiring novelist of historical fiction.

The Liebster award (a German word meaning favourite) is for bloggers who have less than 200 followers. The award is designed to help bring new followers to their blogs.

The rules are:

  • I must share five things about myself.
  • Then pass the award on to five other bloggers.

1. I love cats – they make for good company while tapping out the novel.

2. I plan to go on a diet. I think I said that to myself last year.

3. My husband and I are going to Europe. It was meant to be this year but we’ve moved it to next year.

4. I have eclectic taste in reading, and I’m a stationery and bookshop freak.

5. I love writing, walking, cooking, drawing, playing the piano, going to the movies and dining out.

I’ll be bending the rules only slightly here. My regular visitors have more than 200 followers except for two! which includes JT Webster. Annie Writes is one of my favourite blogs, so first up, I would like to pass on this award to Annie. Second, I had the privilege of meeting quite a few bloggers from my previous post, the majority of them with more than 200 followers as well!  But there are three visitors I would like to give this award to:

The Insecure Writer’s Support Group (comparing ourselves to accomplished writers)

PURPOSE: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!

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Many experienced writers and teachers tell us to ‘believe in yourself’ or ‘believe in your work’. We can probably think of a few reasons or obstacles that shake our confidence and cause us to lose faith. One of those is ‘comparing ourselves to accomplished writers’. Yes, we are inspired by them, we learn from their work, follow their career and achievements, but we mustn’t compare ourselves to them. When I first set out on a writing career, I believed in myself, believed I could write and write a good story, but once I started comparing myself to accomplished writers, the negative chatter would enter my head and the self-belief exit. “I’ll never write anything that good ­– I’m not good enough, smart enough, funny enough, deep enough …”  I had to catch my breath, take back a step or two and look at the bigger picture – we live in a competitive society and are constantly comparing ourselves with friends, family, work colleagues, our leaders, the famous and so on. This applies to everyone including writers!

Later and better than never, I realised this comparing business was a waste of time and energy, but that’s not to say it doesn’t creep up on me when I’m having a lousy day. When it does, I find this tip helpful: Remember to look at the reality – every writer can’t be say, Jane Austen or Stephen King because quite simply, they beat us to it. “They are them. The job’s been filled.” The truth is we’re not in competition with those writers but ourselves! And no matter how successful we are or our level of talent, our true competition lies within.

“Maybe every writer can’t be Proust, but every writer can be a better writer. Comparing yourself to others not only deflates and devalues your own efforts, but actually mitigates against the very thing that has the potential to improve your writing – the private connection to your inner world of experience, that wellspring of authentic feeling and desire from which the impulse to write arises.”

“If you really look at what you’re doing–hopefully, with compassion as well as insight–you’ll see that your only competition, your true challenge, is to be who you are, and to write from that place. Which means, okay, maybe you’re no Proust. But when you’re writing from a place of excitement and authentic feeling, who needs to be?” Dennis Palumbo

Thankyou to SF novelist Alex J. Cavanaugh for initiating the Insecure Writer’s Support Group. To find out more about the group (of which there are 200+ members) please follow this. You can also check out my January post by linking here.

ps You don’t have to be a member if you wish to comment. I’ll return a comment on your blog. All comments are welcome!

WRITERS ON WRITING

Writers are better liars than other people: true or false? In practice I’d say that’s probably false. Most people lie to evade responsibility of a kind. Being a writer requires a great deal of imaginative empathy, and a person who is adept at evasion is rarely (in my view) a curious person, or an empathetic person. Invention is such a small part of the writer’s art. Curiosity, devotion, and compassion are far more necessary. - Eleanor Catton, NZ novelist

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“Writing fiction is for me a fraught business, an occasion of daily dread for at least the first half of the novel, and sometimes all the way through. The work process is totally different from writing nonfiction. You have to sit down every day and make it up.”  - Joan Dideon, US

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Book Review – The Blasphemer by John Ling

The Blasphemer

BRIEF

Abraham Khan, a Muslim author, has written a book that slams radical Islam, making him the target of extremists. After a failed attempt on his life, Maya Rains and her specialist team are assigned to protect Abraham and his wife. But Abraham, to his wife’s fear, is determined to plough ahead with his planned book tour. Can Maya – strong-minded and fair, change his mind? How will Abraham deal with his dilemma? Will he relent? When the riots begin and people start dying … (sorry, no spoilers from me).

MY THOUGHTS

This is impressive – both story and writing style, which is taut and punchy, perfect for a pacey political thriller. Not being a political thriller fan, the availability of free excerpts or chapters to tease and stimulate, can easily sign one up.

I must say, I had a hard time picturing the above events unfolding in our small, peaceful haven called New Zealand. But it is fiction, and I eventually got over it or rather, absorbed by the characters, its pacey plot and compelling nature. Plus, I was keen to garner some insight into the Muslim world, which I did, and Ling delivers, without being preachy. His female characters are a huge drawcard, namely Diedre and Maya, a mother-daughter team who work together professionally, not always in a friendly manner, yet both are immediately likable, strong and committed women.

If I may, there was one slight drawback for me – I thought the ending was too quick, from the action-packed siege onwards. There is a sequel coming though, and perhaps that will make up for the shortfall. Speaking of endings, I was pleasantly surprised to find a few supplements like ‘extras’ or little ‘treats’, especially the two excerpts. What a fabulous idea, and a reflection of the writer’s knowledge, enthusiasm and passion. I was drawn to the first excerpt and wanted more!

RATING

Highly recommend The Blasphemer, and John Ling, is an author to watch for.

PURCHASE & LINKS

At present it’s sold through Amazon as an e-book, where you can find a host of excellent reviews. For further information, clickety-click here to link to the author’s website and blog.

A few upcoming releases for 2012

I couldn’t resist posting this. Most of these novels are coming out in a few weeks’ time, and I plan to read all of them. In no particular order:

  • THE WHITE SHADOW Andrea Eames (set in Zimbabwe, out soon, and the first review is HERE)
  • THE LUMINARIES Eleanor Catton (historical mystery: an excellent Q&A HERE before release)
  • THE FACELESS Vanda Symon (love her detective Sam Shepard series, standalone out soon!)
  • CRUSH Leigh Marsden (I interviewed Leigh back in July 2011 (HERE) when her debut novel hit the shelves, this is her second novel, already!!)
  • THE COLD COLD GROUND Adrian McKinty (Irish crime: a brilliant discovery by the MIML)
  • ANNA MARKLIN’S FAMILY CHRONICLES Dorte H.Jakobsen (Danish psychological mystery, Q&A HERE)
  • THE BLASPHEMER John Ling (reading now and uputdownable, see Q&A HERE)
  • BEHIND THE HOOD Marita Hansen (recommended by Ling, great review HERE.)

Just realized there are six Kiwis in this list! Well, you know, my own story is set in New Zealand; I need to keep on top! Plus, Kiwi writing is stretching its arms for more readers to embrace and hopefully, that includes overseas readers. I see Ireland and Denmark are in a similar boat! Ireland in front …